I made this piece for a class and e-literature competition. It's about driving around San Diego and feeling a little lost post-college-graduation. I made all of the GIFs in the game as well! I wanted to create a meditative, aesthetic experience. I hope you enjoy it!

(works best full screen)

StatusReleased
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 4.6 out of 5 stars
(27 total ratings)
Authorrileyeleanor
GenreSimulation, Interactive Fiction
Made withTwine
TagsDriving, Exploration, Female Protagonist, LGBT, Life Simulation, Mouse only, Twine

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one word

damn

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Not something I would normally pick up but that feeling of the darkness inside cars and the long line stretching out in front of us is common and strong. I enjoyed this a lot with the YouTube playlist piped through headphones and the night outside waiting patiently. Many thanks!

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Is it just me or does the text cut off at one point not allowing me to scroll down to read the rest of the literature?

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it shouldn't do this -- were you on mobile?

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Sorry about replying just now... I'm seeing this also on Firefox desktop; I can see the text only if I zoom out. There should be an option to enable scrolling in the iframe, but it could also be a twine issue.

same I'm on a computer tho

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To be completely honest, I am a young girl in her teens. Though, I related to everything. From the fantasizing of different realities, to questioning sexuality, to bittersweet nostalgia and fearing that I'd endure having regrets. I also have to admit, I have cried for a good 20 minutes now because of this interactive story. I never knew someone could feel or describe how I felt. Keep up the amazing work.

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It's really cool to see some else batting around night time drives and recurring invasive thoughts. Hope you do more. 

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This game was really relaxing to play. I actually related to everything the character was going through. Good job!